Message In Stanza

Poetry and Musings

Love is contagious

Come and save us

Love, don’t forsake us

We have abandoned you from time to time

But come to teach us

 

Love, we are apologetic

We are souls that are shipwrecked

Away from the safe deck

We have forgotten you

Amidst this world of high-tech

 

Love, we really miss you

We started out in the ocean blue

But the bright clouds quickly withdrew

And brought the hellish winds and storms

Love, come back into view

(C) Carly Wiggins 2019

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10 thoughts on “Love, We are Shipwrecked

  1. ropheka says:

    Love is like a roller coaster at Disneyland. Full of twists and turns and full speed ups and downs.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Carly says:

      Absolutely! You better hang on! 😉

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Lydia Potter says:

    So true! This was great…. you did an awesome job writing this poem!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Carly says:

      Thank you very much, Lydia! God bless! 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  3. I really think this is beautiful and I read it as the cry from a broken world to the great and Almighty Healer. Am I correct?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Carly says:

      That is correct. It’s like a plea to God, we have been disobedient as a nation from time to time, be merciful on us! 🙂 Happy you enjoyed it. And by the way, I just wanted you to know, if you didn’t know, that I followed up to your email. Did you get it? 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Hey Carly, I did, I’ll be honest my spring break has not been as carefree as I had hoped. I have it pinned up top to reply to as soon as I get the time to sit down and write back a composed and thoughtful response!

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      2. Carly says:

        I understand, Kayla. 🙂 No pressure. I know you’ll get to it when you can. Have a good night! 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  4. Yes, God is true love, and we need to get back to seeking Him first and walking in obedience to Him to truly bask in His love again!
    Great poem, Carly!! 😀

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Carly says:

      Yes, once we do, as we know, God is very merciful! Amen! 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

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