Message In Stanza

Poetry and Musings

This is the flip
This is what it means to be hip
This is the skip

You fantasize the sky in a different way while being buoyant
I don’t need a skateboard
I need a soul
I will go higher with more tactics
I just to need to concentrate on my acrobatics

It’s the flip in the air
What do you care?

(C) Carly Wiggins 2006

I am kicking it old school with I poem I wrote back in 2006. 🙂 Any thoughts on one of earlier poems? Any improvements?

4 thoughts on “The Flip in the Air

  1. I loved the way the words flowed in this one. Nice 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you so much, Karen! 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  2. yellowwolf80 says:

    I loved it! Flowed so well

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you, yellowwolf80! 🙂

      Like

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