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We can feel shrouded

As the white firmaments spread

Making minds clouded

(C) Carly Wiggins 2019

 

The cumulus clouds move

Colors of blue and pink bled

In a cotton bed

(C) Carly Wiggins 2019

 

 

 

 

 

11 thoughts on “Cloud Haikus

  1. Thanks for sharing your great thoughts about mind, my dear friend Carly 🙂
    Indeed often our mind are just like clouds between the sunhine and us (soul),
    it covers the light…

    Have a nice weekend, dear Carly
    Didi

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    1. Carly's avatar Carly says:

      Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me, Didi. 🙂 Have a great weekend as well.

      Sincerely,

      Carly

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      1. Welcome and thanks, dear Carly 🙂
        Didi

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Beautiful imagery.

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    1. Carly's avatar Carly says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  3. poetryfromtheinkwell's avatar poetryfromtheinkwell says:

    Lovely!

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      1. poetryfromtheinkwell's avatar poetryfromtheinkwell says:

        You are welcome!

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  4. Loved the imagery also. I like how you took an almost negative spin on it. Not all clouds are daydreamy goodness. Some are harbingers of a storm and blot out the sun. Liked how you touched on it.

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    1. Carly's avatar Carly says:

      Thank you so much, minitroubadoura. 🙂 I try to be encouraging in my poetry but also add a little flair of honesty and realism. 🙂

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